55. Redux.
Tears streamed down his face as he hung up.
Accepting that he'd never escape the living memories her voice had wrought. Knowing no matter how far he ran, he'd never escape the love they shared.
But she did what she had to do; created in her a monster that broke through the rules of love.
Posted in reply to this by Chamique.
10 comments:
Is this some serial saga kind of thing that you are doing?
i think both of you love each other...
wonder whats the issue then.
ego...circumstances...??
whatever....
but it makes me smile that so much of love still exists around us...
god bless you guys. cheers.
ooh, ooh. We can make a show starting with the letter 'K' (something not too cheesy; like Kissa Kismat Ka :-)) and make heavy money.
Dibs on Executive Producer.
Anon: Do leave a name. Make up something. Come on.
Harjee: Issue? What makes you think there is one?
BB and Chamique clearly like this Friday 55 ping-pong.
Anon: You don't say?!
HK: You don't say?! Mucho gracias.
D: You don't say?! Money eh? Hmmm...
Love is a fools paradise. That we all die trying to reach.
Good stuff this, only I would change your last para and give it a bollywood-ish twist :D
Tears streamed down his face as he hung up.
Accepting that he'd never escape the living memories her voice had wrought. Knowing no matter how far he ran, he'd never escape the love they shared.
He picked up the phone unsurely. He swore it was her voice over the dead line, the unplanning had begun.
BB: Are we really going to make this a 55-rally? Try your own 55 next week, okay?
HK: Thanks muchly =)
Dilettante: If BB isn't eventually inspired to write his own flash fiction, then could we call it Kis-Kiski Kimat? Or Kiss-Kiss ki Kismat, depending on the plot?
Ooh! I like deep's also..
Cham: The operative word being "eventually". Till such time, let me mooch off your words...
Anon 2: You're wrong.
MJ: ROTFL! Shouldn't it be Vagilis Bleedhimdry?
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