Friday, August 04, 2006

55 Fiction

She passed by them in a cloud of floral perfume that only exacerbated the taunting. He’d kept his silence for far too long, turned to them and asked them to stop.

Girish asked if he loved her. He said, “I once did….”, punched Girish and hurried after her.

They had some catching up to do…


Posted in reply to this by Chamique.

20 comments:

chamique said...

You're very fond of happy endings, aren't you?

blr bytes said...

To paraphrase Orson Welles, a happy ending would, of course, depend on where you stop your story.

Anonymous said...

So is this still two way or three way now? I like this rallying idea.

Anonymous said...

It's menage a trois time!

Anonymous said...

Same sugar-soaked crap. I liked the sniper story better.

Anonymous said...

Anonymous (the first fo many I presume), are you looking for a violent story in 55 words everytime? Or porn perhaps? Maybe thriller? Psychothriller? Sci fic? 55 words is restricting on such ambitious plots.

Anonymous said...

methinks dillettante is the sappy one here. the first story levaes room for different endings.

Anonymous said...

It isnt Dilettante its Bangalore Bytes who is sugarcoated. Methinks he has had pain in his past and prefers happy endings. Poor fool, real life isnt like his story.

Anonymous said...

Seekr; why not put all of them in one story?
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He loaded the bazooka with a plasma missile; the spacecraft had come to an abrupt halt.

Looking at Leila, he took her one last time, his lusty manhood plunging deeper than ever before, looked her in the eye and stepped out to meet the unknown.

And then she saw the tentacle creeping up behind him…

chamique said...

Anonymous (immediately above):
That's bloody brilliant.

Blog it!

Anonymous said...

Too many anonymouses. Get your own blogs! Or names atleast?!

Anonymous said...

People, I just want to say, you know, can we all get along?

Dilettante said...

Ironic an Anonymous complains about other Anonymouses.

Note to self: Must buy server space to track IPs.

Anonymous said...

It is a measure of hope to see that this post and the comments have not degenerated into their usual quagmire.

Long live the rally!

Dilettante said...

Comment moderation is not activated on this blog. I request anyone who leaves a comment (anonymous or otherwise) to do so without being non-disingenuous or deceitful. Such comments will be deleted.

Yes beeyatch, you know who you are.

Anonymous said...

Spoilsport

Anonymous said...

HaHaHa. Shabhash Recluse. Shabhash.

Anonymous said...

Recluse, excuse the pedantry but, it's 57 words this time.

Anonymous said...

Recluse, my apologies. My pedantic effrontery was misdirected. I ought to have, more properly, faulted MS Word.

Carry on, nothing to see.

Anonymous said...

aah , the anons are back. And so are the weepy stories. Bravo!