55 Fiction
She passed by them in a cloud of floral perfume that only exacerbated the taunting. He’d kept his silence for far too long, turned to them and asked them to stop.
Girish asked if he loved her. He said, “I once did….”, punched Girish and hurried after her.
They had some catching up to do…
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20 comments:
You're very fond of happy endings, aren't you?
To paraphrase Orson Welles, a happy ending would, of course, depend on where you stop your story.
So is this still two way or three way now? I like this rallying idea.
It's menage a trois time!
Same sugar-soaked crap. I liked the sniper story better.
Anonymous (the first fo many I presume), are you looking for a violent story in 55 words everytime? Or porn perhaps? Maybe thriller? Psychothriller? Sci fic? 55 words is restricting on such ambitious plots.
methinks dillettante is the sappy one here. the first story levaes room for different endings.
It isnt Dilettante its Bangalore Bytes who is sugarcoated. Methinks he has had pain in his past and prefers happy endings. Poor fool, real life isnt like his story.
Seekr; why not put all of them in one story?
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He loaded the bazooka with a plasma missile; the spacecraft had come to an abrupt halt.
Looking at Leila, he took her one last time, his lusty manhood plunging deeper than ever before, looked her in the eye and stepped out to meet the unknown.
And then she saw the tentacle creeping up behind him…
Anonymous (immediately above):
That's bloody brilliant.
Blog it!
Too many anonymouses. Get your own blogs! Or names atleast?!
People, I just want to say, you know, can we all get along?
Ironic an Anonymous complains about other Anonymouses.
Note to self: Must buy server space to track IPs.
It is a measure of hope to see that this post and the comments have not degenerated into their usual quagmire.
Long live the rally!
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Yes beeyatch, you know who you are.
Spoilsport
HaHaHa. Shabhash Recluse. Shabhash.
Recluse, excuse the pedantry but, it's 57 words this time.
Recluse, my apologies. My pedantic effrontery was misdirected. I ought to have, more properly, faulted MS Word.
Carry on, nothing to see.
aah , the anons are back. And so are the weepy stories. Bravo!
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